Comments on: Hope and Clunbury Video Conferencing http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/ Clunton and Clunbury, Clungunford and Clun, are the quietest places under the sun! Sun, 23 Nov 2008 13:53:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.1 By: Mr Rowe http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-157 Mr Rowe Fri, 17 Nov 2006 18:47:01 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-157 Hi Pupils at Clunbury school! (and Mr Davis) Thanks very much for all the super comments you've posted on our blog. Hope you found our comments useful to make all your excellent reports even better, and that you enjoyed using videoconferencing as part of our literacy lessons. Best wishes, Mr Rowe and Class 2 (Hope School) Hi Pupils at Clunbury school! (and Mr Davis)
Thanks very much for all the super comments you’ve posted on our blog. Hope you found our comments useful to make all your excellent reports even better, and that you enjoyed using videoconferencing as part of our literacy lessons.
Best wishes,
Mr Rowe and Class 2 (Hope School)

]]> By: Tiraj http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-156 Tiraj Fri, 17 Nov 2006 14:27:52 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-156 stephany i really like your head line it was great stephany i really like your head line it was great

]]> By: Elkie McMahon http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-155 Elkie McMahon Fri, 17 Nov 2006 14:27:22 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-155 Connie Reported speech Good introduction Did you have any quotes? Stephanie Good headline-short catchy. You had quotes. Jordie Good headline. Interesting. Quotes good Amaya There was detail. A introduction. Will Was there a headline, and introduction? Sarah Good headline. Introduction. Explanation. Quotes. Long but not to long. Connie
Reported speech
Good introduction
Did you have any quotes?

Stephanie
Good headline-short catchy.
You had quotes.

Jordie
Good headline.
Interesting.
Quotes good

Amaya
There was detail.
A introduction.

Will
Was there a headline,
and introduction?

Sarah
Good headline.
Introduction.
Explanation.
Quotes.
Long but not to long.

]]> By: Tiraj http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-154 Tiraj Fri, 17 Nov 2006 14:21:41 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-154 connie i like your head line and it was good to your passvoice it was good to connie i like your head line and it was good to your passvoice it was good to

]]> By: Chloe Clarkson http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-152 Chloe Clarkson Fri, 17 Nov 2006 14:04:25 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-152 hope you like the comments hope you like the comments

]]> By: Chloe Clarkson http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-151 Chloe Clarkson Fri, 17 Nov 2006 14:03:09 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-151 Bens report hi ben your report was good because it had headline +an intro that tells the story+ passive voice +interviews and it sounded like a report chloe Bens report
hi ben
your report was good because it had headline +an intro that tells the story+ passive voice +interviews and it sounded like a report
chloe

]]> By: Chloe Clarkson http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-150 Chloe Clarkson Fri, 17 Nov 2006 13:50:15 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-150 kATIES REPORT HI KATIE YOUR REPORT WAS FAB BECAUSE YOU HAD A COOL HEADLINE + AN INTRO THAT TELLS THE WHOLE STORY OH AND IT SOUNDED LIKE A REPORT ASWELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK CHECK OUT HOPES BLOG CHLOE kATIES REPORT
HI KATIE
YOUR REPORT WAS FAB BECAUSE YOU HAD A COOL HEADLINE + AN INTRO THAT TELLS THE WHOLE STORY OH AND IT SOUNDED LIKE A REPORT ASWELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
CHECK OUT HOPES BLOG
CHLOE

]]> By: jack p http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-149 jack p Fri, 17 Nov 2006 10:31:08 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-149 Jordy I like your Headline but you've got some personal pronouns in it. Jordy

I like your Headline but you’ve got some personal pronouns in it.

]]> By: Jess http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-148 Jess Fri, 17 Nov 2006 10:29:04 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-148 katie, You had passive voice it woiuld have been better if you had of done some quotes katie,

You had passive voice it woiuld have been better if you had of done some quotes

]]> By: sarah http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-147 sarah Fri, 17 Nov 2006 10:27:31 +0000 http://clunburypupils.ethink.org.uk/2006/11/16/hope-and-clunbury-video-conferencing/#comment-147 melissa your report was very good it had a very good headline melissa your report was very good it had a very good headline

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